Dark One... fallout 2 fic
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Manoil
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Jesus-fuckin-Christ! You guys are arguing about grammar! Just relax, kick back...
Although I usually dislike taking sides, Do'An, I gotta say VasikkA and S4uron27 do have a good point. Your comics do prettymuch suck. It's just that, well... the pictures are pretty basic, with common sprites, very little additional detail, nothing truly original, and almost... well... let's just say no relevance or importantce WHATSOEVER. It might just be you aren't cut out for comics, and that'd be the end of that. Don't take it offensively, just honest opinion of someone who used to do sprite comics.
On the other hand, you seem pretty good at writing the story... I guess. I didn't really delve into it that much, but what I saw seemed okay. Keep writing, and you'll get better every day. Remember, the key to having a successful creation is qualities that people like, and originality that shows it's something you were the creator of. Keep practicing.
Although I usually dislike taking sides, Do'An, I gotta say VasikkA and S4uron27 do have a good point. Your comics do prettymuch suck. It's just that, well... the pictures are pretty basic, with common sprites, very little additional detail, nothing truly original, and almost... well... let's just say no relevance or importantce WHATSOEVER. It might just be you aren't cut out for comics, and that'd be the end of that. Don't take it offensively, just honest opinion of someone who used to do sprite comics.
On the other hand, you seem pretty good at writing the story... I guess. I didn't really delve into it that much, but what I saw seemed okay. Keep writing, and you'll get better every day. Remember, the key to having a successful creation is qualities that people like, and originality that shows it's something you were the creator of. Keep practicing.
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baby arm
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Who's S4uron27?
And why did you have to revive this thread? Do'An has been dead for about 3 weeks. Car accident. A lot of people showed up at the funeral, but his mother had to be sedated. Everyone felt very uncomfortable after that. The flowers were nice though.
And why did you have to revive this thread? Do'An has been dead for about 3 weeks. Car accident. A lot of people showed up at the funeral, but his mother had to be sedated. Everyone felt very uncomfortable after that. The flowers were nice though.
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