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Well, i dont know do you guys like these non-post-apocalytic pictures, but ill post them anyway until you flame me :p

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I did this today.
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Post by Smiley »

Sketchy indeed...!

You should really clean up the picture, I think it'd look much niver that way. Otherwise looks good.
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Post by Migu »

I would, but im not really that good with any program.
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Well clean it up pencil-wise first then.. draw thick lines, and erase the skethy-ness as carefully as you can.
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Post by atoga »

Sketchyness has more merit, emotion and originality than cleaned-up anime-like lines, so I don't think it would benefit from being cleaned up in Photoshop.

Also, I think the area around his mouth is a little too proportionally small... but maybe that's just me.
suppose you're thinking about a plate of shrimp. suddenly somebody will say like 'plate' or 'shrimp' or 'plate of shrimp', out of the blue, no explanation.
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It doesn't have to be anime, just because it's cleaned Atoga.
Notice your own avatar? That's a clean picture, and I don't see any manga traits on that, maybe except for the fact, that he does kind of look asian...

Usually I use a thicker pencil to line it out, then I use an eraser, and then I line it out again, I've tried using photoshop, the lines look fine but...
I prefer the real life version of cleaning!

That paticular picture has it's own look, yes, and depending on how Migu wants it to look like, I guess it looks pretty good sketchy-like

I'd like to see the picture clean though, I think it'd be nicer that way.
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Agreed, I'm just saying cleaned, well-defined lines are characteristic of anime.
suppose you're thinking about a plate of shrimp. suddenly somebody will say like 'plate' or 'shrimp' or 'plate of shrimp', out of the blue, no explanation.
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with cleaner you mean like... this?
www.sunpoint.net/~migu-/art/boogeyman.jpg
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I'd say that's clean enough, yeah =)

Good pic, hehehe
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They have potential. You are getting there so keep practicing...
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A so-so picture. It looks like you worked harder on the sunglasses then the face.
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